Sounds

I wrote this song because everything seemed fake my life. Especially the relationship i was in. Thats what the "sound" represents. I was questioning my decisions constantly. I felt like i was in a big endless dream or should i say nightmare. A revolving train-wreck that pushed me to my limits. I wrote this song awhile back and all my friends liked it but i just wanted to see all of your thoughts on it. Im always open for good or bad criticism. Hope you enjoy it.

Sounds

Sleeping, I must be sleeping
Dreaming yes that too
This all must be fake
and nothing can be true
When will i wake?
I hope very soon

Is there anything that can help?
I sense nothing around
Nothing but a sound
Nothing but a sound
A sound A sound

What makes this noise?
when will i wake?
The answer to every question
in this sound.
This sound not to be found
Tell me what this means
Tell me Tell me now

What makes a steady beat?
Maybe only my heart
Or the blood running through my brain
Has my time finally come?
When will this all be done?
Will someone please tell me what this means.

What makes this noise?
when will i wake?
The answer to every question
in this sound.
This sound not to be found
Tell me what this means
Tell me Tell me now

What makes this noise?
when will i wake?
The answer to every question
in this sound.
This sound not to be found
Tell me what this means
Tell me Tell me Tell me now

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Comment by Ana MariaROCKS on February 12, 2009 at 10:19am: I really like the words to your song, and I can totally relate to your pain. My relationships have been like a revolving door that spins. The men walk thru that revolving door, they cause their pain , and walk right out, only for me to let another man walk thru that painful revolving door. I almost wish that door would not spin anymore and my world of love and heartache would come to end but if I do that , then I will never find my Mister Right, I know he is out there somewhere.

That awful sound u hear could be a train wreck of heartache for you but I hope someday, my friend, u find a beautiful sound in your heart, in your mind and in your sleep, and that sound would be coming from a woman who will love you with all her heart and soul.

Take care my friend.
Love,

Ana Maria ROCKS ! xoxoxo <3 <3 <3

Comment by Silent Rage on October 29, 2008 at 8:17pm: Yeah I would say it's pretty good. You really have talent. I hate that you are sooo young and can write better than me. I've been writing since before you were.... never mind! lol I really like it. Looking forward to more!