Poetry Contest.
I dunno if i should enter my poem into my school contest O.o? Any opinions?
Lately I've been beginning to wonder..
why am i so broken.
even when i scream out loud
my words are still unspoken.
no one seems to understand
no one seems to care
it seems like im invisible
like im not even there.
im tired of people saying i've changed
and how my attitude is crappy
its not that i have changed you know
i've stopped pretending i am happy
im done putting on my fakest smile
and saying im alright
all these feelings i have inside
alone i cannot fight
i wanna run away from here
leave all this crap behind
run to a place thats far away
so i can clear my mind
i need some space i need some air
my lungs feel like i've been smoking
this pain like unforgiving hands around my neck
they don't care if i am choking
i need someone to rescue me
a hero to set me free
as usual im all alone
by myself without a friend
wondering once again
why i am so broken.
[[[Ali Ablaze ^.~]]]
Lately I've been beginning to wonder..
why am i so broken.
even when i scream out loud
my words are still unspoken.
no one seems to understand
no one seems to care
it seems like im invisible
like im not even there.
im tired of people saying i've changed
and how my attitude is crappy
its not that i have changed you know
i've stopped pretending i am happy
im done putting on my fakest smile
and saying im alright
all these feelings i have inside
alone i cannot fight
i wanna run away from here
leave all this crap behind
run to a place thats far away
so i can clear my mind
i need some space i need some air
my lungs feel like i've been smoking
this pain like unforgiving hands around my neck
they don't care if i am choking
i need someone to rescue me
a hero to set me free
as usual im all alone
by myself without a friend
wondering once again
why i am so broken.
[[[Ali Ablaze ^.~]]]
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Permalink Reply by Silent Rage on -
I think the honesty in this poem is powerful. I like how when I was reading it I could hear music pop into my head. I think you really do need to enter this in the contest. Like Angel said I would love to read more by you!
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Permalink Reply by Justin on -
I havent read it yet even, but DO IT!!! dont censor creativity!!!!! if you are comfortable enough to let your work out, then you should!!! you never know whos live you may change by one line in the poem!
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Permalink Reply by rawr. its. {ali.}the.alternative.music.addict on -
thanks =]
i will.
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