Something I Wrote

Hey all just thought I'd share something I wrote a few weeks ago.

Havn't finnished it yet, havn't been able to think of anymore so I'll keep you all posted.

Well here goes, dont judge to harsh :p :

I Opened My Eyes Just To See That I Was Looking Straight At Me
I Was Seeing Myself And All I'd Lost, Only To Realise You Were The Cost
If I Had Seen It Sooner Than Now, Maybe You Could Still Be Proud.
Now This Thing Between Us Is Gone, Finally Now I Start To Mourn.

Now You Scream And Start To Plea, All You Want For Me To Be
Is The One Thing I Could Never See, To Raise My Voice For Those In Need

You Opened Your Arms And Supported Me, So I Could Be The One They Need
I Thank You For Your Guiding Sight, Now I See Whats Is Truely Right
I Had The Power To Change The World, But I Gave It Up And Lost It All.

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Permalink Reply by Bre[T][T] on October 30, 2008 at 5:28am: Well I Like It; ▶ Reply to This

Permalink Reply by Bre[T][T] on October 30, 2008 at 5:28am: So Do I; ▶ Reply to This

Permalink Reply by Bre[T][T] on October 30, 2008 at 5:28am: Yes Its Good Isnt It; ▶ Reply to This

Permalink Reply by Bre[T][T] on October 30, 2008 at 5:30am: Im Sorry Brett Is Bored I, As His Sane Part, Apologise For This Irrational Behaviour.

Although I Do Believe This Is Well Writen.; ▶ Reply to This

Permalink Reply by Candice on October 30, 2008 at 8:53am: I like it too!; ▶ Reply to This

Permalink Reply by Silent Rage on October 30, 2008 at 9:47am: I would have to agree with Candice and sane brett, also I agree with insane brett too. Well written, I really like the sentiment too. Good job to both of you! lol; ▶ Reply to This

Permalink Reply by Livy on October 30, 2008 at 7:52pm: This is Beautiful,
I reallly like this alot.
It would sound killer with the right music :D; ▶ Reply to This

Permalink Reply by Bre[T][T] on November 1, 2008 at 1:53am: Thanx guys, you encouragement means alot.
Im still not getting anything more to write on this.

Although im going to write one about the beach.

lol

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Permalink Reply by Bre[T][T] on November 5, 2008 at 12:26am: Hey all i posted that one and a new one in 2 seperate blogs on my page, so hit em up :D; ▶ Reply to This

Permalink Reply by rawr. its. {ali.}the.alternative.music.addict on January 22, 2009 at 5:35pm: hiya brett
your writing is ace :)
i like this alot && im going to check out your other blogs =]
you should get a LJ ( livejournal) its a good place to keep all your stuff.
thats what i do. just a suggestion too =]

later days
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Permalink Reply by Bre[T][T] on January 22, 2009 at 7:00pm: Thankyou for the advice, i think i will get one, one of my friends has one and does a music countdown thingy. but yeah im definantly considering it; ▶ Reply to This

Permalink Reply by Bre[T][T] on January 22, 2009 at 7:03pm: I have a 4 and a bit hour plane ride tomorrow morning :(

I have quite a few ideas running through my head so im planning and hopeing to get a few down so i might have more up within the next few days.; ▶ Reply to This